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Free commission for :iconjoshin-yasha:

... I'm almost not sure what to say because even though this is a free commission it took me FOREEEEEVERRRRR ^^;;; I'm so sorry Joshin-yasha! I hope that you like it! I hope you all enjoy! Anyhow, the characters I've depicted are Joshin's original characters: Xyston, Misery, and Depth Charge. From my understanding these are human versions of Transformers? But my mission was to depict a love triangle between the three and I hope I was successful! One thing I think I kinda failed on was not making it more obvious that Xyston is sitting ^^;; There's nothin' wrong with being short or anything, but he's actually a large dude, but I thought it would be more sexy for him to be sitting and pulling Misery towards him... arrrrgh. ;_; I think I made some nice breakthroughs with lighting though and my colors.

Here is a cropped closer look at the characters:
Joshin-Yasha Commission Detail by Danni-Stone

Again, I hope you all enjoy! Take care! :D
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

All right! You finally finished this piece, my friend! I'm so glad! I peeked at the progress that you made on it as you were working on it on Facebook, and I definitely think your hard work paid off in a big way! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> I like the expressions on all of the character's faces.

The character on the left of the image certainly seems to have certain things in mind with his bedroom eyes, and very subtle but noticeable slime! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":blushes:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="347" title="Blush"/> I remember liking his color scene especially as you worked on this piece progressively. The color of his hair for instance is quite striking, and I think it goes well with the color of his outfit too. I can't help but notice the small details such as the metallic glints on his hand piece, and the multiple cufflinks on his arm. As you yourself said, the shading in this is it's strongest suit! It's clear how much effort you put in from the figures' 3-dimensional flesh tones, and the array of varying color schemes on ALL of their clothing! I think this is most apparent by the man's face on the right, as he bows his head slightly, and the maroon color of the outfit the man on the left is wearing!

Getting back to the figures themselves, I think the woman's face seems to imply that she likes both men. She doesn't seem to mind at all being close to the man on the left, but yet her arm is rather limp as the man on the left pulls her towards him. It's like her face is saying, "Oh no! Well....maybe....." <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> As always, I like the tiny glints of her eyes, but then the eyes in these figures and all of your figures are usually pretty intense! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

I also like the ribbon on the woman's collar, and I'm sure the man on the left doesn't mind how big her chest is and how it's pressed right up against him! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/>

I have to say that I lean towards the guy on the right myself. Maybe because his face seems to imply that he's the stoic type, but he felt compelled to act, so that the woman he loves isn't stolen by another! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="26" height="17" alt=":love:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="276" title="Love"/> He has a ruggedly handsome look to him, and I like the purposeful attempt to make him and the man on the left look quite different, though still done in your unique style. Love the other little details, like the buttons on his jacket, and from what you told me yesterday, you are progressing nicely with your hands! I'll look forward to seeing what else you come up with but you really should be proud of this work, and I can say that I'm definitely proud of you! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> Keep up the great work! I'll be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="23" height="23" alt=":w00t:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="97" title="w00t!"/>