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Choose Your Own Romance Pg 13

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Hi all! Well, it took me a tad bit longer than I intended, but here is page 13! Rom gettin' all heroic! :p I felt it was best to leave out sound effects here, I'd like to leave the sounds and mood to you guys. I hope that's not a bad move. I just wanted to explain that since I didn't want anyone to think it's unfinished or forbid you think I'm being lazy :p lol I know I have to work on my water effects, but that will be ongoing, I did the best I could with what skill I have it now (yah I see myself lookin' up some tutorials in the future lol).

Anyhow, I hope you guys enjoy! Please let me know what you think of the story so far, the good, the bad, and even the ugly! I'm doing this because I'm having fun, but don't hesitate to let me know what you guys are thinking too, even if you feel that it's taking too long between pages, anything :D

All right, well until next time you guys take care! ^_^

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It's been so long that I forgot which page I had seen last ;__; . I read the whole thing over again to bring myself up to scratch and once more felt thoroughly entertained by the whole quartet.

Both Ella and Julie look like dah bomb on that party. Especially Julie has got a pretty dress and 'do', it's a shame Louie never got to see her in her glory before she got thrown into the pool. Then again, he's already said he thought her pretty, so he doesn't need to see her in a dress anyway.

So Julie apparently can't swim and Romeo is coming to the rescue. I like him better and better, he's a goofy, nice person underneath his douchebaggy facade. I didn't suspect him to be so mindful of what his little stepsister is doing. He is the one who went looking for her, not *gasp* Louie! Shame on you, nerdboy! Playing Twister instead of seeking out your lovely lady, my foot.

Drawing these underwater panels can't have been easy, but you've done a wonderful job. The character's poses and clothing look floaty and I can see Romeo struggling to get back to the surface. I also like how he squints in the middle panel!

I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next, how Rome is going to react, whether Louie will hear about this and how Julie is going to look without glasses. They have been covering most of her face, so I'd like to see how she really looks like.